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Re: Bellum De Hominis Chapter 6- Meet The Righteous Leader
Hello, GeoCha, Wolf here for a review. Since I haven't read previous chapters, I may ask questions which answers have already been given. Bear with me. So, the one big ...
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Re: She Will Be Judged: Chapter 6
Hello, Legible, Wolf here for a review. I will let you know right most that I have not read previous parts, so I may be overly confused or ask questions ...
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Re: Final Destination Chapter 14 (Edited)
Hello, Tiara, Wolf here for a review. So this kind if seems strangely familiar, and I think I might have reviewed an earlier chapter, but I'm not entirely sure. The ...
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Re: Chapter 6: The Dome
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. So, I see here a lot more of the World Building is taken place, and we learn a lot about the history of ...
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Re: Chapter 5: The Academy
Hello again, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. I like this chapter, since here we get some more info on this realm you've created, specifically the academe, Alpha. It's really ...
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Re: Chapter 4: The Realm
Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. Aww! That ending made me on the verge if tears! I don't hate her mom really, and from the way she's acting, I ...
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Re: Going through Time-Chapter Six: We Are So Dead
Hello, wisegirl, Wolf here for a review. Percy Jackson fanfiction? Very interesting. I'm not really a big fan of fanfiction, because really I feel like it's just a spin off ...
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Re: Alone with the Sun -- Chapter 6
Hello again, Purple, Wolf here for another review. Wow, seriously, wow! I feel bad for not picking this up earlier. Really, the beginning really got me engaged, and at spots ...
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Re: Alone with the Sun -- Chapter 5
Hello again, Purple, Wolf here for another review. Okay, I know it's frowned upon to comment on parts of the work before one is finished reading, but this kind if ...
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Re: Chapter 3: The Arrest
Hello again, Artimes, Wolf here for a review. I just noted that looking through all the titles of your chapters, they all start with 'The' and have something in relation ...
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Re: Alone with the Sun -- Chapter 4
Hello again, Purple, Wolf here for yet another review. You have a wonderful talent, I must say. The warm feelings in this was just beautiful and the ending I absolutely ...
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Re: Alone with the Sun -- Chapter 3
Hello, Purple, Wolf here for a review. I know I probably shouldn't be starting right in the middle at chapter three, but here I am. With that being said, I ...
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Re: Revenge's Shadow Chapter 2
Hello, mptigers, Wolf here for a review. Alright, so I've read your previous chapter along with this and well, I can't really say I'm engaged really. The very full narration ...
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Re: Chapter 2: The Magicians
Hello again, Artimes, Wolf here for a review. Another fabulous chapter! I really like how we are introduced more about this magic world in this chapter, about there being different ...
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Re: Tristesse: Chapter 1 Friendship, oh holy sacrifice.. Part TWO
Hello again, Zafea, Wolf here for another review. Alright, first things first, I recommend to you to split your chapters into parts. They are a little too long. Really, no ...
Jul 27, 2014
