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Aww thank you! And yep you got it that's basically what happened. It's not about really like a couple or something which I thought it sounded like, it's more about ...

Oh wow thank you so much! Yeah I was reading through it and realized the words repeat and are boring so I'll try to patch it up later but thanks!

Oh ok! Sorry I didn't know that whoops. Yeah, I understand about the drafts and it is cool I just didn't know lol. Ohhh ok and yes she does have ...

Thank you! Yeah I've been noticing about how there isn't any dialogue and I kind just threw out all the info so I'll work on fixing that!

Thank you so much! No no it isn't picky, this is just what I needed. I can't write a book by myself without some editing and critic, right? Yep thanks ...

Thank you! Could you tell me the errors? That would be super helpful.

Oh dear there were a lot more to this idk why it cut it out

Yes np! She kept her distance from the houseplants and the fish tank, making a beeline for the front door. Slowly unlocking it, the winced at the constant noise that ...

I will!!

So I just struggle a lot with things in my home like verbal abuse so I wrote down my feelings but translated them to be like a metaphor for physical ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you that means so much to me! :)

Yup I know, that's how I wrote it.

Thank you so much! Actually I just found the photo on the internet for my profile picture, i couldn't find the artist though, :( . No this was really helpful ...

Yeah I understand that, maybe you could at least change the title? But really you are right with keeping it serious.