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Re: Holes
first of all up rhymed with Fuck, CLAPP CLAPP Capp. Three Points to mister Weymouth for his choice of words. Now that i have expanded the only humor found with ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Star Crossed Lives
Miss Teen Queen. I beg of you, pleas don't hate me. This story shows great promise, your writing is pretty good all the scenes work. I felt the flow you ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: Ripped Bark
this is guðdómlegt like we icelanders say (heavenly would be the transaltion). I managed to vizulize what was happening, your writing was good. The Ryms were no short of epic. ...
Mar 13, 2014
