SpeedyPencil

Spooky, I like it. I really love what you've done with the whole repetition of these 'I like this house' phrases, it really gives off this uneasy vibe. I was ...

Thankyou so much! I'll make sure I clear those things up.

Thank you very much! I will make sure I fix up all those nitpicky details. I also agree with you about the realisticness about the spelling bee, the major thing ...

Thankyou very much for the review! and that is creepy :o

thankyou!

Thankyou so much for the review!

Note: Ignore the weird names, they're just names I put in before I put in real ones that I think of.

Oh gosh, I wouldn't want to be in your class then! And thankyou, I might work more on it soon.

Thankyou for the review!

Thanks for the review and the compliments! I've got lots of new things to work on now, oh and I'm glad you told me about liking those sentences. I was ...

Thankyou very much for the review! I agree with the first paragraph, I guess I'll be revising that! Yes, I will be going on with it I forgot to mention ...

Thankyou so much, I thought they stuck out too, I'll change them around a little. And yes, it's actually an excerpt so it's deffinately not the full short story, I ...

Ok so, I don't have time to review it right now but I'd just like to say 1. I really like this and hope you continue this, I really love ...

beautiful! unfortunately I'm no good at critiquing poems, all I can say is that I love it! I can't wait to see more of your work.

Wow that's really great! Being an amature actor myself I could very much imagine doing this scene. I liked the directions you gave of what you think the actor should ...