Soziopath

Hi Adrian707, I really enjoyed your story. I can see that you have put a lot of time into making your story as detailed as possible. One thing your story ...

Hi RowMuhBoat, I loved your story, as I got farther into the tail I began to feel more ,and more attached to the characters. I wonder if in the beginning ...

Hi duringlondon, This story has to be one of the best ones I have written a review on yet. I love how when the mongols find them you really show ...

Hi jacksonm2002, I really enjoyed your story, it packed in many historical elements, and had very good dialog. I wonder if you could have been not so sudden on the ...

Hi KylaGreenhut, Your story has always had me at the edge of my seat, and couldn't wait to read more of it. Other than some punctuation, grammar, and not putting ...