Southern_Belle

Hey, I really liked your story! I've always loved Greek mythology, and the way you invented the seven deadly sins is incredibly creative!! I loved it!! And I have to ...

I really liked the Abhorsen Triology, though I don't really think it's better than Harry Potter (we're big HP fans where I'm from!!), and I never really got into Lord ...

Very good story! Now, my critique is probably going to be a bit biased, since I am thoroughly interested in the American Civil War and know a lot about it. ...

Great theme. I loved it. Too many times people take friendships for granted, and I think this poem conveys the thoughts that we should all remember when we feel like ...

First of all, I really really like your imagery. It gives my imaginiation a burst of color, and I feel like I can see the leaves, and smell the air. ...

:D *CLAPPING ENTHUSIASTICALLY* I LOVE THIS!! Don't we all feel this way sometimes? I really think the structure of the poem is great. I've written several like it, myself. Anyway, ...

You know what? This is the first haiku that I've read that wasn't about nature. . . It's really good though, just because of that. I like things that stand ...

:D I really like this poem. Actually, the first couple of lines spoke to me. I have a younger sister, and we sort of relate that way. Anyway, great poem! ...