Soulkana

Awwws that made me sad! Still it was great tylyn and hope to see more from you ^^ if you want you can review my story Violet Saga, hopefully my ...

Holy crap tylyns!!! I knew you were great when I read one of your poems at school but this totally blows me away!! So thrilling I was practically off the ...

I have a few things to make it better but other than that theres not much. What I would do is space it so it looks like this Your mask ...

Dear Diary, I don’t know what I did to make him so mad. I didn’t know he had a temper. I just tried to be a good girlfriend. I would ...

Chapter 5 The next morning he came at around ten. He rang the doorbell just as everyone was about to leave. I answered the door. “You’re early.” I told him ...

Chapter 1 Family you should indent each paragraph “It is with great pleasure that I present to you for the very first time , Mr And Mrs. Ted Dixon,” beamed ...

You sit outside, with a clipboard in your arms, resting atop your knees. You are staring at a blank page of paper- there is nothing more terrifying- with a pen ...

Awesome Chapter Truly LOVED IT. I have a few corrections but thats it. "That is should." It should be it. That was all I could find. ^^ I really loved ...

Some day I wil, it should be will have, the power, what I see you with. Some day I will have, the smile, what is always on your face. Some ...

I want to know if you meant it I've thought about it Countless times Looked at it all the time; still do sometimes truth is I've thought of a couple ...

You did amazing hope you keep writing I wish for more now. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!! The two parents looked at each other with confusion and then the father ...

I think this was amazing but it was hard to follow I kept losing my spot. I'd say space the paragraphs but thats a suggestion. And holding eachother as if ...

Enchanting whispers luring you near, each perfect note filling your core with fear. A song so beautiful, yet deadly cruel, you resist temptation, it's against every rule. Every nightmare is ...

Awww that made me sad reading the full version...but that's great!! Its amazingly well done you can actually edit the page so you could type the rest in at the ...

you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me and deep in your eyes i find a home. you're a little boy in the sun when you ...