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Re: Chapter Four
Hey I had meant to review like A HECK of a lot sooner Written....I got...sidetracked >> yes that's it sidetracked XD. Either way amazing with your wonderful descriptions XD....even if ...
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Re: A Thought
Really loved it. Its true boredom brings out the best in us writers ^^. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more!! Happy Review Day and best ...
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Re: I Hate Him Chapter 15
Drama how sweet it can be and how dangerous lols. Anyways I really really loved this... I can't wait for more so update soon!!! Good luck as I didn't find ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Second Chance Chapter - Chapter Four
Oh dear now I want to know what happens next haha!! Keep writing I eagerly await more!! Your descriptions are perfect. The tone makes the mood of this very reasonable! ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Down Below- Chapter 4
Plot still going strong here Alex!!!!! hehe I wonder what Ari will do haha. Anyways I hope to read more of this soon keep updating!!! I didn't find any spelling ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Down Below 3
Still loving this I'm sorry I didn't review before now or the second chapter been kinda busy but I love the plot and I couldn't find any spelling errors to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Him Chapter 16
This was great!!! I had read the other chapters but I couldn't review when I got done....I blame school XD. Anyways amazing job and I really liked it! Keep up ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Journey To Adamaris
I really liked this my probem; TOO LONG. Another is you need to separate your paragraphs and dialogues so we readers don't get lost, which I did too many times ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Courage
AWESOME!!!!!! I really loved this and it made me smile! So sweet. You need to expand and give more details about your characters so we can understand them haha. Either ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Senseless
Think you could've expanded this a lot more Anime. It is a good start but you should add on to it. Hopefully you will since it has a lot of ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Deadly Dream
Pondering sleep of mine Around my waking body blackened vine The knife held in hand pulses with light Trying to carve my last night Glinting with a deadly glare Pressed ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
This was like woah! That was amazing ^^ Good job anime keep up the good work!!!! I really loved this and I can't find anything wrong that no one has ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Human Life
This made me sad but that's ok. It was really thought out and the emotion was beautiful. Keep up the good work! This was amazing and I can't wait to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Tell Me It's Okay
Nice job I really enjoyed this haha. Good luck and I hope to read more soon!! I already took a look at the prologue and reviewed so I hope that ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Perfect Image
I really liked this and I hope you continue to do poetry you really are good at it!!! Keep up the good work and Happy Writing. I couldn't find anything ...
May 1, 2011
