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Re: Three Haiku, Nicol's version.
Hello there. First I must commend you for even trying out haikus, to me they've always been difficult. On the record I do not particularly like Haikus and I find ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: The Wall
Wow. All I can say is wow. This is truly amazing. You managed to capture both the fight someone puts up in their daily life and how that is easily ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: Game Over
Hey there! I like this a lot! I think it's interesting how you choose to start with the fact that this speaker is not crying. It captures attention well because ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: I with a wreath of feathers, godlike
Hello! For the first poem you've ever posted this is great! I like how you used both feathers and heavens. With the connection being that feathers, like birds, represent freedom ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: Blank Pages Seldom Empty
Overall I think this is great! The idea behind this is wonderful. I love how it is based on a cor, but the idea that a color is more than ...
Aug 19, 2015