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Re: Protect book. code name growth. (Because it has no name yet)
Damnnnnn! BLOOD WILL BE SHED TONIGHT! Cool! Was the soldier walking away from the battle? Did he betray his forces? In this line: "It was far enough to be untouched ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: My cat is a loser
I like it. Obviously mixed cat feelings. I hope your cat returns to you eventually! I guess that is one of those lessons so you don't take things for granted. ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Grimm 2.1
ahhahahahahahahah yesyesyesyesyesyesyes. Nice. I like the beats, I like the silence. beautiful! Jacob seems interesting, although perhaps he can be developed more? Jacob's dad is reciting poetry almos
May 4, 2015 -
Re: I think I've lost my passion for writing
Aw! Don't worry! You'll get it back. Trust me, I've gone through these stages multiple times. Evrey time I think I've lost it for good but all I have to ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited
Between these two sentances the rhythm was sort of lost: "could make you wish for frenemies/at least they'd be somewhat nice." Be confident and write more from your heart than ...
May 4, 2015