Sophie

Ok I love this... But I don't know why I love this. I need to mull over this. And I'll be glad to do so.

So by make it into prose do you mean use the same idea but change the format entirely? To be honest I dont know how I thought I could tackle ...

Ok so this is pretty lame... I think... I thought I'd try a new style. Not sure if it counts as poetry though. There's just a thing I want to ...

Tehe... *is too giggly right now tyo say anything useful*... Your title used to be my blog name. The *s and everything...

Before you explained I thought you were like me and you sometimes lay on your back with one arm perpencular-ish and make it dance... I thought you were describing your ...

Ooh I enjoyed that. I think perhaps I would've liked more ellaboration on "addresses the audience". But I just enjoyed the style.

It is kinda a poem though, isn't it? Should I have put it in Other Poetry?.... Not sure why I didn't in the first place... I guess it's because it's ...

Obviously not then........

Yup yup E E Cummings deffinately... Blegh Although my currently drugs-orientated mind did see something more, but I know you didn't mean it so...

[quote="Griffinkeeper"]Whatever the content of this is, the structure of it is all askew. This makes it harder to follow.quote] Care to ellaborate?

I guess I didn't exactly put my best into it...

I love it - it sounds like a rap!

Thank you!! Anyone else have any help?

Now this I KNOW is awfull... Someone help me

Ooh thank you, you've rekindled my want to write this story. No, sorry it wasn't a sex scene... That doesn't come till later :wink: ..... But since you took that ...