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Re: thiz totally ruzl
Are you SERIOUS?? Sorry, let me right that so that you can understand... Ar ez usa1 sperti6us??
Mar 31, 2006 -
Re: Brewer's Daughter
DUDE!!! Be careful, Poppi is/was a member on this site!!!
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: Blakdrealm I (incomplete)
Isn't Yellow Card the name of a band...?
Feb 17, 2006 -
Re: Untitled
chocolate-teapot (cute name btw) - Read above. It's only hinting at emo. But it's with an acoustic guitar, so... I'm really going off this song, that's kinda why i put ...
Feb 17, 2006 -
Re: I'd Be the Worst Kind of Famous
Wow. That's really deep man... Like, totally, deep. *tokes... waves hands in musical fashion.... eyes half closed* Seriously, that is actually pretty powerfull. Can't find any critisism... Good in it'
Feb 13, 2006 -
Re: Untitled
Emo-y... I guess slightly. It's a failry soft song though, over all. Buildin up at appropriate moments. With guitar.
Feb 9, 2006 -
Re: Sixteen Years Gone By
I like it actually. Wasn't sure if I would, but I do. Can't think of anything to improve it. Nice.
Feb 6, 2006 -
Re: a misleading love poem
Uh oh, starting to get a bit too proud of this poem. I think i might start writing ALL my poems in the bath.... *cough*
Jan 31, 2006 -
Re: Heart Shaped Box (nothing to do with Nirvana)
I guess it kinda does. It is about changing growing, but keeping the past tucked away somewhere. Sigh, maybe, not too corny?
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: a misleading love poem
Yay. Well I'm very pleased with Snoink's comment. forest_ofthe_nightingale - I kinda see what you mean about the careless thing. And xanthan gum - the slings bit (kinda stolen from ...
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: Valentine's Day (edited)
I liked the "Wasted Wednesdays" bit But I agree with everyone that the "Why pick only one day to love?" bit is classic. Don't mind if I use that do ...
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: Heart Shaped Box (nothing to do with Nirvana)
Ok, new try. Still don't know what to change the title to, but I will. I got sick of all your whispered nothings, And seasonal sighs of reminiscence. The fog ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: did you know i couldn't last i always knew it
Is it wrong that I loved this?... I should try it without the loud music and pay a little more attention, but I just.... liked it.... Ok I really gotta ...
Jan 25, 2006 -
Re: Heart Shaped Box (nothing to do with Nirvana)
timjim77 - Why do I have to change the title? Do you have any suggestions for a replacement? xanthan gum - Not too harsh. Thanks. Any suggestions on improving the ...
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: Under Your Skin
Yeah this is good. The layout could have easily distorted it too much, but it didn't, it kind of enforced it. I like it.
Jan 20, 2006
