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Re: Left.
Hello! This is a sad but beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. I like the repetiton that you used here -What he couldn’t see What they didn’t know What she ...
Dec 28, 2012 -
Re: Ghost
Hello! Nice story; your revelation of the protagonists thoughts add suspense to it. (I think there was some on my face, but I might be imagining it. I was beginning ...
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: Familiar Process
Hello! This is a nice poem. The regret and pain felt by the protagonist, which is a little hard to show sometimes, is shown quite well here. I like the ...
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: Asleep on the Ocean
This is the first poem that has caught my attention and I actually enjoyed reading this a lot! :) I like your use of english, it's simple yet effective. I ...
Dec 21, 2012 -
Re: Time doesn't change people, people do
Hello, I like your story because it's simple yet quite nice. Just two pointers; You hinted that Maddie was sort of jealous of Gemma and she felt that Gemma was ...
Dec 21, 2012