Sonicroyale

I suppose I'm more apt to correct this than anyone else in the universe--but, it's William *Mountfort*. Haha. Otherwise, 'tis cool, 'tis cool; I have no problems with it! Sometimes, ...

Whoa! Trippin', dudette! :P Sorry, the hippie in me is trying to break out. Is that the kind of feel you were going with this poem? The word "Sparkly" seems ...

"Something." .........Buhaha, just kidding. This little tale is kind of depressing! But that is likely your intention, I'm sure. Is it wrong for me to analyze the peanut butter out ...

Oof. Very ambiguous piece (which really is a matter of opinion as to whether that is good or bad.) When I read the poem, my imagination develops an odd collage ...

Ha, it's lookin' purdy purdy good, even though it was written in math class and all. I'm just glad the team isn't attacked by hordes of vicious square root signs ...

Haha, aw... Nice story, Searria! You're better off than I was back when I was a wee lad; I remember the extent of my work was a collection of spoofs ...

I remember twice having a lucid dream. They were very entertaining, especially because the second time around, I somehow materialized my imagination and took over the dream. {insert diabolical laugh ...

I would hope she would try to find help, if not from a psychologist or the like, but even just from friends around her. She has such a gifted life, ...

Though in some respects it could benefit with some polishing, I do like the imagery portrayed in this piece! Here goes my critique.... ________________ there is melted snow salting my ...

Ooh, how fun.... This tale almost reminds me of some of the work I've done before, though it's every bit a unique story as I can see. First, the bad: ...