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Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 4 (Ribbits and Rain)
Yes, less-good Avery, the frog rain IS cool. "Avery winced, thinking Jason was going to slap him." That's just awesome. Again, I laughed. At that, and at the rest of ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 3 (Less-Goods on Terra)
Wow, now I'm even more curious. How could there be a "parallel planet" in the same universe? In fact, you seem to have implied that there are many of these ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 2 (Jason Volks)
Your attention to detail--especially unusual detail--continues to delight me. The "storm of smoke flying from" the woman's mouth...the "threat of splatting across the top of the can"... I was particul
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 1 (Renegade Sneeze)
Wow, this is so...surreal. Chasing after a sneeze? Running outside and seeing a thing like a soda can drop from the sky? And then...it's an alien bringing back his sneeze? ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: The Suicide Diary: Prologue
The one thing I'm asking now is, why? Mainly, I'm asking why she killed herself, but I'm also asking, perhaps, why she felt so energized. Perhaps that's just what it ...
Aug 4, 2015
