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It's alright. I know it is hard to draw much from short haikus. :) I suppose anything on insanity would have to do with Poe. XD Sorry if I sounded ...

Hi Magneta. Thank you for the review. I just like griffins, it has nothing to do about Harry Potter, though I can see where you got that. Just going to ...

Thank you! I will consider that; I had never heard of a tanka. :) Thanks again.

Thank you for the review! I think I am going to continue with this. I will take those points into consideration. Thanks again!

Thank you! Some of the terms I used are temporary, as I wrote this as a test to develop characters and setting. I will use your questions to develop this ...

Wow, thank you! I think I will continue it, though it may take a while. I really like these characters. Thanks again! :)

Thanks! I was just trying to develop these characters and their world a bit, I wasn't sure whether to continue or not. I think I will, I have enjoyed these ...

Thanks for the review! We will take those tips into account. :)

Thanks for the points, dragon. We will look into that.

No problem. I really like this piece. :)

Ohhh racket. Grown up so fast! *sniffs*

Well...I personally think I do better with poetry than short stories, but I have tried a few. I try to get out of my comfort zone every so often, so ...

Thanks for the review, Rosey. Although I really appreciate the feedback, and would totally go back and fix what you said (you have some great points), the thing is this: ...

Thank you!

Thank you! *hands tissue*