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Wow, Subtle! This is fantastic, seriously. Like a poem made into a story. O.O Wow, wow, wow. I knew you could do it! This is amazing... *faints*

Thank you! Honestly, this is an older story, so I don't think I will fix it much, but thanks for pointing those out!

Finally, a nice review. :P Thank you. Glad you don't hate my guts and my poetry completely...

Wow, you sound really annoyed in this. Good thing I know you, and that you don't mean it like that, but wow. That actually kind of hurt, considering I work ...

Thank you Magenta! I worked very hard on this poem. I put those lines at the right because I felt they were more of an echo of what was already ...

Thanks again! :)

Thanks so much ladcat! I was thinking that maybe these two had some background, like previous best friends or something, and that is why Jake knows so much about him, ...

Thank you!

Thanks Mess! Yeah, racket and I kind of wrote this on a whim, like, hey! Bonding experience. So it is a little rushed, and yes, not my style. We were ...

Thank you!

Okay...well now I feel self-conscious. XD

Thanks Subtle! Like I said before, I know my grammar well XD and I didn't capitalize anything because I felt it added to the feeling of the person not caring ...

Thank you! I know my grammar, but I do not have to capitalize the I's if I don;t want to. I thought it added more character (like the person doesn't ...

Thank you!

Thanks! That means a lot. :)