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Cool, sounds interesting. No problem!

Thanks so much Percy! :)

Thanks for the review, Hannah! I did mean for this to be all over the place, because it is meant to represent my mind during my worst sleepless nights. Your ...

Cool. I'd like to hear it if you do that. :)

Thanks for the awesome review, bright! You had some really helpful points, I will surely fix those. However, I meant this poem to be symbolic, not literal. I explained to ...

Thanks for the awesome review, Hannah! I actually meant this poem to not be literal, but symbolic. For example, the tiger lady is a girl who cuts, the fat man ...

That shouldn't be a reason to give an unhelpful review. And if you spend time on give good critiques on errors and strong points alike, you actually get more points. ...

Um...thanks? :/

Thanks for the points and review! I will be sure to look into that. And I was trying to personify these items, because the character takes everything to heart. Thanks ...

That was amazing and inspiring. Great job.

Wow.

Oh no, you have a lot of differences. Just one of the main characters dies and wakes up in a supposed "paradise" and is on a search to find out ...

Oh, no problem! I know you can do so much with this, is the thing. I really, genuinely look forward to reading more. ^-^ Lol a laughing disease. If you ...

Wowowowow. I love this! Geez. Nice job! I loved the combination of humor and bitter-sweet. Like well-blended coffee. ;) So glad you are doing more with this, I love the ...

Hi Story. Thanks for the review. I actually didn't forget about grammar, I chose not to use it to get my point across. Freestyle poetry doesn't have to use grammar ...