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Thanks again for the review! :D

Thanks for the review! I'll take all that into account. :) I'm not sure about the Caretakers. I deliberately didn't go very far into detail with them because I wanted ...

Nah, those errors are nothing compared to some of the messes on here. o.o The deaths were fabulous, I was just confused as to when an extra guy appeared to ...

Thanks so much! :)

Thanks!

Thanks for the review! :) The Caretakers are the people who make the laws and enforce them in the dystopian society. They are the ones who tell people that it ...

Thank you very much. Your compliment means a lot. :) I'm pleased you picked out the detail with colors. I meant for Forrest to be male, but I suppose he ...

Thanks for the review! And thanks for catching the typo. :)

Haha, thanks 1. I'll probably not fix this work because it's older, but thanks for the comments anyway! :)

Thanks, 1. I'm laughing at this old piece. I forgot it existed. XD

I adore this.

Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it. I tried to make the characters realistic and portray a disabled person as a person. Thanks again! :)

Thank you! Welcome to YWS!

Thank you! :)

That age seems realistic, and I think you wrote it well. :) I enjoyed reading this.