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You caught me at the last stanza. Really good. [/quote]This isn't love I would make it ' Is this love?' Makes it more dramatic. You know. She is confused and ...

I loved this. :) :D :) :D Really great, my favourite Stanza was 4. Really well written. It is really true what you say: Poems don't have to be a ...

It is not bad, but great! :) I really liked it, very deep in a way. Just one thing, I think an a should be added in the beginning of ...

Not bad. I wont say it is the best, but it is good for someone who doesnt write alot of poetry. :lol: It was a nice poem to imagine if ...

I loved the idea of the story and tell eveything in good detail, jus one thing. PARAGRAPHS!! it makes it much easier to read. When I looked at it, it ...

Just one thing, make spaces. Makes it much easier to read Nice poem loved it :D :)

Well done Nice piece, really shows the darkness of math, very and nice. For some reason it reminds me on Alber Einstein. Don't know why, but have been weird lately. ...

Really funny :lol: Enjoyd it :lol: Very cute in a way :D A few corny parts :wink: but still good Well done

Really nice and dramatic. Not that pathetic love stories. This was really good :) :D :) :D :) :wink: You write it as if you are part of it. Really ...

I think it was great. It felt like you were there with her. It was like feeling her pain she felt. How much she loved him. Very good. Can't wait ...