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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: A Deal with the Devil

    As a lover of fantasy and the supernatural, the story title caught me. But it was hard to stay with it. The characters don't feel very real, but like they're ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Little Werewolf

    It was very interesting! I actually felt uncomfortable reading it from the baby's perspective, because I could vividly imagine how they felt to be so close yet so far from ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: The Thing with Wings

    Hello! I really liked this story. The theme of angels that have become human really catches my eye. However, there were some things that confused me. Like Noelle said below, ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Fallen Angel Pt. 1

    I have my own love for angels and supernatural/fantasy stories, so the title definitely caught me. My first nitpick is the pacing. It just doesn't flow for me. The first ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Sin and Death

    It was a bit strange to follow, but the ending was able to make it a little bit clearer. I agree with Maricore that God leaving a note is odd. ...

    Jun 7, 2016


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