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Re: A Deal with the Devil
As a lover of fantasy and the supernatural, the story title caught me. But it was hard to stay with it. The characters don't feel very real, but like they're ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: The Little Werewolf
It was very interesting! I actually felt uncomfortable reading it from the baby's perspective, because I could vividly imagine how they felt to be so close yet so far from ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: The Thing with Wings
Hello! I really liked this story. The theme of angels that have become human really catches my eye. However, there were some things that confused me. Like Noelle said below, ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Fallen Angel Pt. 1
I have my own love for angels and supernatural/fantasy stories, so the title definitely caught me. My first nitpick is the pacing. It just doesn't flow for me. The first ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Sin and Death
It was a bit strange to follow, but the ending was able to make it a little bit clearer. I agree with Maricore that God leaving a note is odd. ...
Jun 7, 2016
