Sofiel

I liked the idea behind this, it was interesting. The first two complete phrases ended with the same word. You might want to find another word to use instead. H ...

I hate the way i cringe when some one speaks your name i hate the way you drive me postivily insane When people speak highly of you makes me want ...

I really liked the idea, and the emotion behind this. It was filled with metaphors and symbolism, that with a little work could help the reader find a mental picture. ...

I absolutely love this. You used very descriptive and emotive words to describe the situation humanity is in. My only concern is a line in the 4th stanza. And the ...

Oh, my god. This is brilliant. Others already mentioned little word changes and such, but someone said that it was too short. On the contrary, I think it cuts through ...

Absolutely amazing. I'm jealous of your ability to rhyme! :) On another note, I find you repeat 'understand' a lot, it takes away from the poem. I wasn't looking at ...

I really like this poem, and the message it sends. The abusive man/woman being weak, and the victim becoming stronger. What exactly is the pyramid you refer to? Perhaps you ...

First off, this is amazing! The first line reminded me of Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Greenday, but I forgot that once I read the rest. It seems really well ...

I love this! Also, I'm happy someone turned Bella into a vampire! The first few paragraphs are very short, and to the point. Could you possibly expand on the ideas, ...

I really like the theme/idea, but there are a few major issues. I am not afraid to be alone. I actually like it because it's peaceful. But no one understands ...

Oh my, this is not blah. Not in the slightest. I can see why it was published, it's amazing. I like the repetition of "light meets the dark"... This a ...

This is a beautiful poem with a really sweet sentiment, but I have to agree with the others. The rhyming seems off, perhaps the same idea written in prose or ...