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I personally like the openness of this poem. There's no real explanation of what is causing the writer pain until around the end, and it makes me want to continue ...

Ok so I have to say that i really enjoyed this, but at the same time i kind of agree with Disenchanted. I was kind of confused throughout the story ...

So first i would like to say i love this piece. So cute and sad. He cared for her all those years, but never said a thing because he was ...

Wow, this was an amazing piece. I agree with StoryWeaver when it comes to the same-sex thing. While I’m ok with it, I never been able to kinda connect with ...

I really like your story =) its got that just right touch in the beginning of the story that makes it a romance novel without making it totally cliché, but ...

I really like your story, it's sweet and cute, with touches of sadness. And mistakes, I don't think I saw any other then a few coma mistakes here and there, ...

I think that this was written so beautifully, and it touched my heart. Despite of what the other people have said I think it’s perfect the way it is. The ...

Ok, so the story isn't bad, but it seems to miss an element that makes a story personal, makes it speechless when you read it. I think my biggest problem ...