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You, just made me happy! Thanks for the comment. Yeah, sometimes my poem flow in awkward way haha. :)

I used the word - Lullaby, simply because it shows how teenagers often sweet talk to their partner/bf/gf , and perhaps the promises uttered when they're together but in the ...

Hi catcha. ^_^ Yes,it is about a person who has lost his way in life but at one time, he realized it and repent. Thank you for your review :)

Wow..I can feel the emotions. The words flow well..But i think you should put some punctuations on them so they can be like, more understandable and the sense of the ...

Such a strong emotion you knotted in the poem. I love it. The story telling in the poem is okay and i think it is slightly monotonous. But you managed ...

Thank you. You have pointed out my errors and I'll try my best to improve.

Thank you. :D i will write more as writing is my passion. Thank you.

Thank you so much for your comment! Yes, I agree that the word should be belief. I really appreciate your comment for me to improve my English. For your information, ...