Snoops

This story is about Ede and the voice inside her head Lu. Rip it to shreds please.

Eden runs inside a burning building chasing a scream.

Eden goes home.... (Gosh, descriptions are hard)

While Eden stands in front of the burned house, she meets an unwelcome stranger.

Eden talks to her dads about her adoption

Some say the Human Species won't last a year. Can someone please destroy this to shreds? It's the first chapter to my new book. All criticism welcome!

Some say the Human Species won't last a year. I want someone to tear this to shreds? Please? It's my first chapter and I want a good start!

Good day! Hello! I promise that if you read this I will get you to laugh at least once! (I hope)