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See?! I told you I would be back! ;D Just... um... after finals and all that crap, lol. Anyway! I purposefully took a step forward and positioned myself in from ...

I actually really liked the pacing, lol. And YES. You have put this off for far too long! :D The entire group writhed and burbled so that Tua was nearly ...

Er, just a quick comment here... you said that you were called a "basted." However, basted is a verb that you would use to describe juicing up a turkey. The ...

Hi mustang! Okay, so this is going to be a horrible nit-picky thing that I noticed, but you keep on saying stuff like, "If I were the car / I ...

Wow! This was really really pretty! I love how you pit the two images and contrasted them with each other... the spring of water and the chemical mess, and kind ...

Allie! I liked your other poem so much that I had to come back! :D Anyway, one thing I think you can do to make this poem that much better ...

Aww, I really like this poem. It's completely adorable and I love the message it has. I also like the way it rhymes and everything... it sounds like something you ...

Hmm... so, correct me if I am wrong (which I can definitely be!) but it seems to me that this is a double suicide (don't fear the reaper?) and they ...

Hahaha, I approve of your dreams! ;) Okay, so this is bizarre and weird and I kind of adore it. Someone I knew once said that the weirdest stories that ...

Haha, well, I definitely didn't see that one coming! I don't know... it seems really random, like you weren't really sure of what to put, so you decided to make ...

Ooers! I want to see if I can get this. Well... okay, it's kind of confusing, but I at least want to try! :D It seems like you're talking about ...

Hey summerlovely! :D Okay, so this poem! It was mostly about this guy not noticing you and how you yearned for him, right? That definitely sucks... I hate having to ...

Yeah... I have to agree with Janika here, lol. I know you were very impassioned when you wrote it, but for some reason it seems pretty funny to me because ...

Hey flowerchild! :D Okay, so I need to run off to class soon (gack!) but I think the reason why you think the beginning is good and the rest isn't ...

Aw, of course they're normal for you! You're 15-years-old. You're allowed to have minor collapses every once in a while. ;) Now, as far as your poem goes... I think ...