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Re: Balloons
Hey Allia! :D YES. Girl loses scummy boy and gets much better boy who isn't afraid to be honest and romantic with her. I love it! But then again, I ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Illusions
Hi Katarina! :D Okay! So this seemed to be a very philosophical poem that dealt with the topic of existentialism! Or... a poem that was so heartbroken it seemed to ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**
Hi SkyeDreamer! :D Okay, so this piece is very cute! Very high school, lol. I have to admit I really like the ending. I mean, you go on and on ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Posies
Hey Tori! :D Okay! Just a couple of thoughts (and hopefully I won't be too rambly or whatever). First of all, your English teacher sounds like no fun, lol. Very ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Messengers of Wane (1)
If I may be the first to say this, the Isle bit reminded me of Sanctum. XD Anyway! Continuing on... Mayor Gallberg was among the last to arrive. You talked ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Hey, Daisy.
Rawr! Okay, so I did a video critique on it. Yup. Link is here: Anyway, the other comment I have is that there are a lot of words that are ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
Ack, I am so excited for you!!! :D Anyway, just a quick typo that I had to point out: because of this small burden we bare.
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (5)
Mayuko is indeed a slippery one! Okay, so just a quick note... the first part of this chapter dragged for me a bit because all it is is just a ...
Jun 18, 2011 - Re: My Guardian Dog - 6 Rewritten Jun 18, 2011
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Re: Mockingbirds
Comments are in red! Tom Robinson: A True Mockingbird Harper Lee’s classic novel To Kill a Mockingbird is a deeply moving story of innocence, cruelty, hatred and kindness. Nothing represents ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Hi! Okay, so maybe I am the only dissenting opinion here, but I didn't really care for this. The letter was indeed heartfelt and everything, and I loved how it ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The Return (contest entry).
it was the biggest contest ever to grace YWS’ website
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1
Even this would be ridiculous but innocuous—save for the fact that the most popular of your deeds is to kill off my type. It’s quite sickening, really. I still think ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 2
Again: Mwha! (I reverted to my scant store of the Old Tongue; this was always a surefire way of gaining their respect. Besides, no one spoke it anymore and I ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1
Mwha! (You can take that as an evil chuckle or kissing sound.) This is excellent, lol. Really nice and fun! A rollicking kind of ride. I kind of think you ...
Jun 15, 2011
