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Hey Tori! :D Okay! Just a couple of thoughts (and hopefully I won't be too rambly or whatever). First of all, your English teacher sounds like no fun, lol. Very ...

If I may be the first to say this, the Isle bit reminded me of Sanctum. XD Anyway! Continuing on... Mayor Gallberg was among the last to arrive. You talked ...

Rawr! Okay, so I did a video critique on it. Yup. Link is here: Anyway, the other comment I have is that there are a lot of words that are ...

Ack, I am so excited for you!!! :D Anyway, just a quick typo that I had to point out: because of this small burden we bare.

Mayuko is indeed a slippery one! Okay, so just a quick note... the first part of this chapter dragged for me a bit because all it is is just a ...

Comments are in red! Tom Robinson: A True Mockingbird Harper Lee’s classic novel To Kill a Mockingbird is a deeply moving story of innocence, cruelty, hatred and kindness. Nothing represents ...

Hi! Okay, so maybe I am the only dissenting opinion here, but I didn't really care for this. The letter was indeed heartfelt and everything, and I loved how it ...

it was the biggest contest ever to grace YWS’ website

Even this would be ridiculous but innocuous—save for the fact that the most popular of your deeds is to kill off my type. It’s quite sickening, really. I still think ...

Again: Mwha! (I reverted to my scant store of the Old Tongue; this was always a surefire way of gaining their respect. Besides, no one spoke it anymore and I ...

Mwha! (You can take that as an evil chuckle or kissing sound.) This is excellent, lol. Really nice and fun! A rollicking kind of ride. I kind of think you ...

LOL! This was funny! I think the last line seemed a little bit out of place (since it didn't rhyme or anything) but I totally agree with the poem. I ...

Okay! The beginning of this sounded like a crappy romance novel, lol. I shall demonstrate! He looked hard, and dangerous but his eyes and hands were soft. He looked hard? ...

I love you!