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Hi Wolfdra! I was avoiding these sorts of posts around September 11, so I didn't get a chance to see this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that yeah, crazy ...

Hi AncientForever! Okay, this is going to be a quick comment... This poem sounds a little strange. For one, it doesn't seem clear of who you're talking about or in ...

KITTEH. I didn't see this until now. Don't kill me! >.> .> Of course, um... I could be completely misreading it. I admit this. I have a morbid imagination. But ...

Hey Dreamwalker! :D Okay so... yeah, this is definitely a weird love poem. Not quite sure if I would call it quite a "love" poem as there doesn't seem to ...

Hey Veritas! I was kind of avoiding September 11 pieces before while the sensationalism was at its highest, so I didn't get a chance to read this until now (what ...

Hi inkwell! :) Okay, so you're a gifted writer that can use the the five senses in order to express yourself. For example, in this poem you have the taste ...

Hi Cspr! I saw some of your later chapters lying around unreviewed, so I figured I would review them... but first, it's always good reading the first stuff, right? ;) ...

Hey duckiedye! :D Oh wow, you have quite a story! I can imagine why you wouldn't want to testify... frankly, that sounds rather awful. I mean, you finally get over ...

Oh wow, this is interesting. Just one quick comment... I don't think you really developed your idea of sterilization. It felt like, instead of arguing your point logically, as you ...

First of all! I used my evil mod powers to fix your paragraphing. WOOHOO, right? Next of all... OMG. TUA. So, Elmo is the mother of Tua? ZOMG. This is ...

Hi Jas! Just a quick comment over here... from what I understand, this is a Roman Catholic funeral, correct? That is, you have the rosary, the statue of Mary, the ...

Oh wow, I really, really like this. I mean, yes, it does need help, but you have stunning imagery and an interesting topic and a dynamite title... combine those ideas ...

Hahaha, I shuffled right to this! :D Okay, there were several bits that I kind of wondered about. And yes, I am probably over-thinking this too much, but Gotta have ...

Hi Noelle! :) What an interesting premise! Silly teenagers trying to get into a castle which is obviously something they shouldn't be doing, lol. It'll be interesting to see where ...

Hahaha. The ending is pretty funny! The pear bit made me smile. Whoops, right? :P Anyway! Just a couple of comments. :) First of all, apples and pears are ripe ...