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  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Things Never Change

    Hey bullhead! Kind of like a minotaur, right? ;) Okay! So, I really like your word choice and word play here that you use in your poem. It’s kind of ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Other » Literature, Other Re: A riddle for you - What am I?

    …I THINK I KNOW WHAT IT IS. It’s love! It has to be! See? Look at it! I send a shiver down your spine, ← Just the THOUGHT of my ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncertainty

    SOL! Okay! So, you have a lot of awesome words here, which is completely awesome. Why is it completely awesome? Well, simply put, you can use even more awesome words ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Fighting

    Alex! My beautiful lady… I don’t think I’ve reviewed anything by you? What a shame! You're a very talented author... not sure why I haven't! Anyway, this is going to ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Literature, Humor Re: Last Stage

    Hahaha! Of course! All performances have to be like that — there has to be some hitch or something to make them truly memorable. I mean, you can’t have it ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Assorted boxes

    Hey Trident! Okay, so first of all… check this out! But worry not . Extra space! Ahhhhh! Okay, now that this is done… having not read the prompt, I don’t ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter one of the Lost Legend - The Harvest Moon

    Okay! So, when you write a first chapter, what you want to do is to hook the reader and make them want to read more. So, for instance, many writers ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Why?

    Yay! Tangent posts a poem! This makes me a happy Curves.

    Feb 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Magnificent Mansion

    Okay! So... uh... I know this is a murder mystery. Like, I know this. It's in your description, for goodness' sake! So, I totally understand this. And, because it is ...

    Feb 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: novel in progress, Her Name Is Daisy

    Hi, Bilbostoes! YAY! Romance! We love romance. I hope she gets with Peter, and that Peter's all she hoped for! Though, for a minute I was a bit cautious... MAYBE ...

    Jan 31, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Hopeful Dream of a Teenage Boy

    Hey Probie! This story was cute! I loved the characters, especially the little girl! I was wondering though... where is the story though? There is no real pivotal conflict or ...

    Jan 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: No Need for Alarm

    What a neat little story! I like it a lot. A neat commentary about euthanasia. I don't think you have to do the "THE DAY IT ALL CHANGED" bit. Maybe ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Sleeping Beauty

    Hey Macy! You showed me this poem a couple of days ago, and I am finally getting to it now! So, sorry for the delay. I really liked the premise ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: An Unusual Trip

    Hey CrazyGirl! Sorry for not getting to this sooner! However, I am here now, so let's get back to business quickly! I liked this story, though I am a bit ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Summertime Sadness

    First, a quick little typo! yyou'll See? You can edit it easily, I hope. :) Next... the piece! I thought this was very interesting how you started off with what ...

    Dec 7, 2012


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