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Re: Things Never Change
Hey bullhead! Kind of like a minotaur, right? ;) Okay! So, I really like your word choice and word play here that you use in your poem. It’s kind of ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: A riddle for you - What am I?
…I THINK I KNOW WHAT IT IS. It’s love! It has to be! See? Look at it! I send a shiver down your spine, ← Just the THOUGHT of my ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Uncertainty
SOL! Okay! So, you have a lot of awesome words here, which is completely awesome. Why is it completely awesome? Well, simply put, you can use even more awesome words ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Fighting
Alex! My beautiful lady… I don’t think I’ve reviewed anything by you? What a shame! You're a very talented author... not sure why I haven't! Anyway, this is going to ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Last Stage
Hahaha! Of course! All performances have to be like that — there has to be some hitch or something to make them truly memorable. I mean, you can’t have it ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Assorted boxes
Hey Trident! Okay, so first of all… check this out! But worry not . Extra space! Ahhhhh! Okay, now that this is done… having not read the prompt, I don’t ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Chapter one of the Lost Legend - The Harvest Moon
Okay! So, when you write a first chapter, what you want to do is to hook the reader and make them want to read more. So, for instance, many writers ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Why?
Yay! Tangent posts a poem! This makes me a happy Curves.
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: The Magnificent Mansion
Okay! So... uh... I know this is a murder mystery. Like, I know this. It's in your description, for goodness' sake! So, I totally understand this. And, because it is ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: novel in progress, Her Name Is Daisy
Hi, Bilbostoes! YAY! Romance! We love romance. I hope she gets with Peter, and that Peter's all she hoped for! Though, for a minute I was a bit cautious... MAYBE ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: Hopeful Dream of a Teenage Boy
Hey Probie! This story was cute! I loved the characters, especially the little girl! I was wondering though... where is the story though? There is no real pivotal conflict or ...
Jan 19, 2013 -
Re: No Need for Alarm
What a neat little story! I like it a lot. A neat commentary about euthanasia. I don't think you have to do the "THE DAY IT ALL CHANGED" bit. Maybe ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Sleeping Beauty
Hey Macy! You showed me this poem a couple of days ago, and I am finally getting to it now! So, sorry for the delay. I really liked the premise ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: An Unusual Trip
Hey CrazyGirl! Sorry for not getting to this sooner! However, I am here now, so let's get back to business quickly! I liked this story, though I am a bit ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Summertime Sadness
First, a quick little typo! yyou'll See? You can edit it easily, I hope. :) Next... the piece! I thought this was very interesting how you started off with what ...
Dec 7, 2012
