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I edited "but" into "buy" for you because I have scawy mod powers and can do that sort of stuff. In the future, you're going to want to edit the ...

Hehe! This reminds me of the perpetrators' side of the story for some crime thriller like CSI. Cool? I think so. :D What you're going to want to do is ...

Haha, you are a crazy person, you realize this? :P Anyway, I may just be perverted and stuff, but I want more action! I mean, you got me hooked as ...

ZOMG! I think this might be the first thing of yours I have ever commented on! So lots of apologies... I should have been looking harder. But better late than ...

Okay! So I've seen you around YWS and you seem to be an awesome critiquer. So I won't try to tone this critique down for you. I think you can ...

Aha! And so we meet again! :D I don't know which of my critiques you'll read first, so I'll basically introduce myself again, just to be nice. :D I'm a ...

I was reminded by another poem from this poem, and I just want to share it with you really quick before I begin with the critique. Why? Because I want ...

Hahahaha, you don't want my rants about what imagery is and how you can use it for your poem? :D Okay, fine. :P Here would be my rewrite of your ...

Okay, so as you already know, I don't really like this for a number of different reasons. The narrator is creeeeepy and I hate him. Usually, I am used to ...

I don't know how personal this is to you, so first of all, forgive me for the critique. I don't want to be mean to you... I just want to ...

Much much better! *applauds* Your last stanza rocks out loud. And it's amazing you could do all this in one edit. That makes you awesome. :) Okay. So now you ...

Hola December Nights! I've seen you around, but I think this is the first thing I get to critique of yours, so I'll make it good! :D This is a ...

Um... I am confused. And since I almost know you, I shall be horribly frank. So don't kill me, please? ^_^ 1) DUH. Of course her dad doesn't come back ...

Awww... cute ending. Still, this seemed to me more of a list poem than an actual serious attempt at poetry, if that makes sense. I mean, I browsed over your ...

Dude, you're awesome. What's funny is you don't know how awesome you are. But you are awesome, and don't you let anyone else tell you this. And by that, I ...