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Re: Clumsy
Great poem! I loved most of the elements, however, I'm super confused on the meaning... We live life like we write on paper; silly lines, you call them, scribbled inarticulately, ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Trojan Horse
This is a really incredible poem! The emotions conveyed are clear, and the language is truly beautiful! The word choice here really made it fabulous. I'll try to be nit-picky, ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Sorry
Great work! However, I have a few nit-picky things. However this is a very relatable poem, and I really like the concept and how it was written ^^ Ok. Nit ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The Lion
This is awesome! I love the usage of the old language, and it super duper annoys me when people use some old language, but not all! Fabulous work with consistency ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The One
Wow, I loved this poem a lot! I, like someone whoever posted before me, thought this would be the stereotypical love story poem, but instead I found myself reading a ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Expectations Falling
Really well written, although there are a few small things I'm a little confusing. Overall, my main concern is that I didn't exactly get the full concept; I got like, ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Starting a war
I really like this a lot! It's always difficult with songs because of the reader's lack of music, because often times, the music can- actually, all the time- the music ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Mr. Negativity vs Ms. Positivity
Very well written, and very entertaining as well! Although I've never played softball(not once!) I was somehow able to relate to the pressure you were feeling, and I was almost ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: The sun can be cruel
To be honest, at first, I didn't really understand this poem until I did a quick analyzing in my head. It's nice how each stanza has the same beginning as ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Fire's Escape
I actually really like this poem! I love how the first line in both stanza's begins with in a way describing what the fire's doing. I also am a fan ...
Aug 30, 2011
