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I truly thought I might've been half way through with these by now. Geez. But at least I have something to review when I come on. x) As a basic ...

Hi there. :mrgreen: I suppose I only have a few great issues with this poem. Mainly the way you have the beginning here. You seem to simply be belting out ...

Hi there. :mrgreen: So I just finished reading your story, and there were a couple things I wanted to make a point to mentioning to you. I read your spoiler ...

On to chapter 3. Here we go. :mrgreen: Again, I'll mostly start out with points that I liked most about this portion of your story. Firstly, I think it's usually ...

Hi again. :] So there was one main thing here which I really like, and that's the relationship between Ross and Janey. It's not that nauseating I'm-head-over-heels-for-my-kid relationship. It's very ...

Hi there. :] So, I've read this story, coincidentally enough. Wasn't my favorite story. In fact, the whole plot was just a tad bit dragged out and there seemed to ...

Hey, JP. :mrgreen: So I saw all these consecutive parts to a novel you recenty posted. Seemed like a lot all at once, but the way you've broken this down ...

Hey, Ty. :mrgreen: Glad to see you posted a story up. Your writing is definitely the sort of style I like to read. Figured I'd lend you a little review ...

Kafka! Hello again. :mrgreen: So here as promised for chapter two. Also, thanks for sending out the PM so I knew you had another chapter out. Otherwise I may have ...

Stori. :D This. Is. So. CUTE. But I musn't get into how cute it is now. I'd be too caught up and would hardly get to reviewing the actual work ...

Hi :mrgreen: So I don't usually review song lyrics. I don't feel like I really have that big of a knack for putting songs together and knowing if things are ...

Ranger Hawk, You are a twisted piece of work for writing this. :mrgreen: Yet I applaud you. I don't think I've ever read something quite as mental as this, where ...

Hello there. :D So I just finished reading this prologue, and I have to say, it was indeed very romantic seeming as you put it here. Romantic as it may ...

Hi, me again. :D So I see you're sticking with your writing style, doing the caps on every letter thing. x) I've sort of gotten use to it now. So ...

Hi, Eva. :D Well, this was pretty different from what I was expecting. In a good way, of course. Despite your title mentioning point blank "Not a Fairytale" , I ...