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Hi there, Dragongirl. :mrgreen: I think what you have here is nice and in more ways than none, a respectable piece. But to be frank and not harsh, that's all ...

Oddkid :mrgreen: So, I read this like, two days ago was it? I don't remember, but I read it, and I had intentions of returning to come and review it ...

Hi there, Anwesha. :mrgreen: Well, I will say that the rhyming in this poem did not sit quite so well with me. Which is a shame. Rhyming poetry can tend ...

Hi there. :mrgreen: Well, this was certainly interesting. Although, I'm still not quite sure where the inspiration stems from exactly. Or what inspiration could have possibly driven this out of ...

Jenth, hi! :mrgreen: I don't believe I've ever had the pleasure of reviewing one of your works before. I suppose I'll start here with this then. My starting impression was ...

Nightlyowl. :mrgreen: I come bearing a review. Seeing as this is a fairly short poem though, I'll attempt to be as thorough as I can in dissecting it. I suppose ...

Dearest, Jas. ;] I figured I may as well lend a friendly review, seeing as no one has yet commented on chapter three and I'm always late to show to ...

Hi there, Ancientforever. :] So I read in your spoiler that this was meant to be a story/scene type of thing. It sort of explains why I couldn't grasp the ...

Cal. :mrgreen: Well, this was certainly cute . Indeed a great story. You seemed to have your idea constructed quite cleanly of what you wanted this story to be, and ...

Well hello there. :mrgreen: It's nice to see you've taken up writing as a hobby. When you're just starting out and think of it as a sort of hobby, it ...

Hi, Cailey. :mrgreen: First off, I want to say I'm not sure why you were apologizing in the spoiler for all the Spanish in your work. I think you had ...

Storyweaver. :mrgreen: I'm not usually one for reviewing too in depth on poetry, but I feel like this was something in fact very beautifully written, so I had to stop ...

Hi there, Tranquility. Well, I will say that this was an interesting piece. Especially much so that it was a diary entry posted, and not general fiction or something other ...

H'lo Jas. :mrgreen: Fancy meeting you here. I've come to lend a review! (No duh.) H'okay, I guess I'll begin with the obvious 'what I liked about this' , as ...

Dearest twin brother, Mikko. I have arrived to review for you. :3 To start things off, I will say I'll try to pay no mind to the fact that this ...