SmylinG

Personally, and I don't me to sound like a complete downer when I say this, I agree with the other reviews posted. It was kind of empty. Almost rushed through. ...

What a cute, and sad little story :( Poetry really does help get out best the things you want to say. Although, personally, I feel it would have flowed a ...

This was great :) even with all the different forms of poetry it fit so neatly together. Like a telling of a story through different languages. But it all made ...

This is so romantic ! I love, love, love it!.. Not many people can write romance novels in this way. Your writing and your way of words is so unique. ...

Overall, I feel your writing was very enjoyable :) But a few things having to do with the situation in the story confused me and hardly seemed relatable to real ...

Wow! Love this! I really encourage you to continue to add to it. I'd like to keep reading to see what happens. My only critique really is you should've probably ...

This is the kind of poetry I enjoy reading. Simplistically beautiful. My favorite part was this section of the poem: Eternal life; thee immortal. Thy beating heart; crimson portal. Oh, ...

I think what you have here is a good start of a chapter, but maybe not a real "chapter" yet. You could have continued to go on after the one ...

I have a few small critiques to this piece. First, I was slightly confused behind the mothers motives. Why was she panicking for her daughter so quickly when she was ...

This is a really beautiful sounding poem. Your personality seeps through like this very passionate person. I can very much tell why writing chose you! You have so much potential, ...

I really like that last closing statement for your chapter. It carried a lot of strength coming from your character. Your character Emilie sounds like a strong character period. It's ...

An interesting read. It has a lot of potential being so different from other stories I've read before. I think it may have moved a little too fast in the ...

First off, I just want to say that I disagree with some of the other posts in the sense that I do not think the chapter was too long or ...

This is definitely the kind of story that keeps me reading. It is the heart and soul of teen angst! Raw, and thoroughly relateable to real life. I think what ...

I like this one, wow. You have a ton of potential with the storyline. My only real critique, some parts became a little unclear to me during the end when ...