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JCK :mrgreen: Better late than never, right? So here I am! Now, seeing as you have received so many great reviews already, I'll attempt to shine the light on slightly ...

JP :smt044 Well, this hit close to home. Generally I mean, the content. I respect the briefness of it as well, for I think it mirrored the act of how ...

Hey, JP. ;] So I'm gonna go ahead and be a little less nit-picky and jump right into the gist of things here. Now, for some reason I think I ...

JP, :mrgreen: So I've finally gotten around to posting a reply to this, and the first thing I must say is, well, I think you've written better. :[ This piece ...

Hey, Tink. :smt044 I've finally made it. Sorry for the delay. Allow me to jump right in. So as for your opening paragraph, I have a few complaints. My major ...

H'okay, I've made it sooner than expected. :smt044 Like before, I guess I'll just jump into it. Majestic ceilings and marble floors (.) N one can hear the echo of ...

Marquito --MARCO. I'm here. Well, I suppose I'll just leap right in. Walk, walk, gentlemen (,) straight and tall with your black trench coats and umbrellas (,) Colgate white teeth ...

Hey, Soulk. Here as promised. ;) I suppose I'll just jump right in. The faint click of the front door being unlatched stirs Nastusia from peering with mixed contempt and ...

H'okay, since I'm not a very strong poet, I'll have to take this apart bit by bit for proper feedback. Though I'm sure it matters not either way. o.o Anyway, ...

Lumi, Well, I'm sure I've attempted a few pitiful reviews at your stunning work before, but never have I truly gone in depth on deciphering your poetic mind and style ...

BlackInk. I've come to do a little dissecting. :mrgreen: Well, first off I guess I want to say that I think it's sweet you've gone and written a poem like ...

Ren, hi. :mrgreen: So there're a few things that aren't quite sitting well with me on this. First off, the overall aesthetic of your poem. Yes, you have stanzas broken ...

Hi, Starleene. :mrgreen: Well, I don't normally do this, but since this is so short, I supoose I'll go ahead and just quote you for corrections. (') How much do ...

Djinn. :mrgreen: Well, this was certainly interesting of you to write. :] In fact, I don't think I've read anything quite like it before. Perhaps the thing I enjoyed most ...

Yo, sis. :mrgreen: So, I don't think I've yet had the chance to review anything of yours! How queer. I saw this though, and I'm surprised I was even drawn ...