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HI YOU. Slushy's here for a review. Haha. That rhymed. Anyway... I'm not going to touch technical stuff. XD Hmmm. I lied. There is still nothing else on it save ...

First of all: ilu

This was horrible. JUST AWFUL. Just kidding. :D I'm gonna not be biased either... even though you wrote just for me and I love it. "I want to be with ...

I'm back again! Are you getting tired of me yet? ;) I'm just going to jump right in! The work was hard, especially since she hadn't lifted a finger for ...

Hi again! I feel like my opening is getting old. Haha. It looks like EloquentDragon really covered all of the technical stuff so I'm not going to comment on that. ...

Hi! I'm back for another review! I'm just going to comment as I read. "Her heart was pulsing in her throat by the time when one appeared in front of ...

Hi there! SlushySlapped here for a quick review! I was going to just read your third chapter and review based off that because it was in the green room, to ...

Hi there! SlushySlapped here for a review! I see DreamWork got that first sentence. Definitely need a comma there! "I looked towards Crucifere and she was frozen still, she had ...

Hi! SlushySlapped here for a review! I'm going to be honest, I don't know much about WarCraft. Actually I don't know anything about it. But I am going to review ...

Hi! SlushySlapped here for a quick review! There wasn't anything I found to correct! I'm pretty sure this will be my shortest review ever. I really loved this! I am ...

Hi there! SlushySlapped here for a review! I'm just gonna review as I go. Suggestions in red! "Grant was the bubbly music enthusiast who ran the place . Although he ...

Hi CrystalPony21! SlushySlapped here for a review! Alright so first thing I noticed before reading is that this is one huge paragraph. That makes it difficult to read. I suggest ...

Hi! SlushySlapped here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! Second, I'm going to be honest, I did not read the whole ...

Hi person I don't know. I have a strong feeling your name is Adam. So that's what I'm going to call you. And also, I'm going to review your work. ...

Hey there! Slushy here with another review! Looks like a lot of people already pointed out grammar and such. But I found a couple more things. First thing I noticed ...