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Re: The Village (Part 1)
Hey there! Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed this a lot and I feel like it can go in some interesting directions but I just wanted to put my two ...
May 4, 2018 -
Re: I Will Return: Chapter 3.1
Hey there! Slobst here with my two cents: I really enjoyed this chapter and I was able to lose myself in your world and the way you write is so ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: The one he left behind
Hey. Welcome to YWS! I'm Slobst and this is my two cents: Firstly I want to say, before I get properly started , is that this story is obviously very ...
Jan 8, 2018 -
Re: I Will Return: Chapter 2
Hey there. Welcome to YWS! I'm Slobst and I'm a pretty new (returning) member as well :D But before I start I must actually say that I think you're a ...
Jan 6, 2018 -
Re: "i'm okay" (dg's diary)
Hey! I seem to always start my reviews this way but I'm not good a poetry... It's not my forte at all so take everything I say with a grain ...
Jan 1, 2018 -
Re: Limbo
Hey :) So first up I must say that I have no education when it comes to screenwriting. All I've done is read a couple books (I loved Robert McKee's ...
Dec 31, 2017 -
Re: A long way home chapter three and four
Hello again!! :D :D (Well done for being the second story I review :P ) Lets jump straight into it :D As I said last time I won't be able ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: A Long Way
Hello there, I'm Robbie (Well done on being the first story I review), I wanted to start to say that I really liked the story even though I hate it ...
Dec 3, 2014
