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Re: Taking Chances
AWWWWWWWWWW THIS IS SO VERY VERY CUTE!!!!! I'll keep reading thanks ^^
Apr 18, 2013 -
Re: Here and Now
This poem is a very good attempt at Shakespeare!! ^^ Well done
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: The Slender Man. Chpt.1
Oh my god! I love the slenderman. I'm deffinately gonna jeep track of this story. I think this last sentence was very well crafted; "The last thing Johny, a boy ...
Apr 10, 2013 -
Re: Thanks a lot, facebook...
I like this...its very unique. A story about facebook? Nice :L I didn't really like the Social Network movie but this is really good. Continue it please ! I will ...
Apr 10, 2013 -
Re: My Dark Voyage
Maybe you should use paragraphs. I keep getting lost... And what is with the question marks throughout the page? Anyway I hope you take time to edit this. It is ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (prologue)
This is a good chapter but I would like to know more about the Gardilla Beast. What exactly is it? I also like the names Derin and Aria. There very ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: One more night
This story is really awesome. Its dark and I can feel s bit of tension in the air as I read it :) You have a really good plare for ...
Mar 25, 2013 -
Re: Lust
This reminds me of an Emily Bronte novel but about Jack the Ripper! Its awesome !!! Keep it up I wanna read more! So I'll stay tuned and I wonder ...
Mar 25, 2013 -
Re: I Bleed
I love how you started the story off by simply saying "I hide". Its so simple and sums up the main character(s) already! I love the relationship Leah and Josh ...
Mar 25, 2013
