SkyeJane

Hey there I agree somewhat with the comments beneath my own. I really like this though.Ii don't see a problem with it being sad(all or most of the clippings of ...

This is a a great topic as it pertains the world today im many more ways than we can tell from just this really made me want to read on ...

Aqua this is pretty good.You describe the situation of the character really well but it is hard to keep track of what is happening. In other words:we can see how ...