SkyeDreamer

Wow. That was really unexpected. First of all, I'd like to repeat what the other commenters said: This was great because it was about something that really affects people; also, ...

I tend to be a fairly doom- and- gloom poet who writes a lot of emotional stuff (whether bad or good). But I can honestly say, I liked this! Very ...

Wow, this is really good! I love the way you use words, almost... not abstractly or differently exactly, but... I don't quite know. I liked it, though! Great poem. You ...

Mini review here, since I have to go! Alright, I love this topic. My only nitpick would be that (especially in the first 2 paragraphs) you repeated or overused a ...

I liked this! I haven't read the other chapters, but this one was pretty good. What was going on with the characters and the werewolves..? I know you must've explained ...

I. love. this. A lot. There I was, feeling all proud of what I'd written recently, and I came here and read your poem, and... wow. That's all I have ...

I really liked this, especially the ending. It felt almost like a tribal song or something like that to me; the flow was quite good. Then the end, like I ...

I was actually about to say, this wasn't set up like a typical poem! It was very good, though. Sorry, but I didn't quite like the part about Texas Hold ...

Nitpick first: "eaten and prayed upon" prayed should by preyed, I think. Like prey... That's it. This was incredible! Maybe a little confusing, but really great. At first I wondered ...

This was really sad and powerful, even more so because it is based on a real event. I have a nitpick: When I get home it’s gotten worse. That doesn't ...

I really like the story in this. You had some grammar errors: "seamed" should be "seemed" and you missed some punctuation (especially commas), but this was pretty good. It was ...

This is very good; I could really get into the characters and imagine the story. I did think some parts were slightly confusing, especially at first with who was who, ...

This was really funny! But grr... You never leave anything for us reviewers to nitpick! You're always too thorough! Oh, wait, there is the one, but it has already been ...

First of all, I'd like to say that I think in general cursing is ugly and bad, but it fit in with the story and gave it even more character. ...

Okay, I agree with bits and pieces of both Isha and Skorpionne; here is my full review (in blue)- I'll do general comments after. :) Once a glorious flower , ...