SkyeDragon

Hello again! Just a few things, I won't load up all the bad things about this chapter on you. All right, I'll just say I was a bit confused a ...

I like it! It all flows together very nicely, like a stream, like those words were meant to be strung together. I agree, it could very easily become a song, ...

Very nice, you made it specific and to the point, so I wasn't wondering what it was about. That is probably one of the tough parts to overcome when it ...

Hello, first off, I really like where you are going with this, this will turn out to be a great novel. So, I noticed a couple things, but here's a ...

Hey Nick, here's a quick review for your story. The first thing I noticed was that you were starting some sentences with 'and' or 'but'. Rule #1, try to avoid ...