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Skyaejin

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Griphen

    Hi, this is Skyaejin! I really liked the way you wrote this poem. The story or content is unlike any other poems I had previously read. The way you end ...

    Jul 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Witch In The Modern World

    Hi, this is Sally. It's very interesting! Your title caught my eyes. I like the way you expressed your feelings about how society judges. Maybe you could add more diversity ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: HOPE

    Hi, this is Sally. Wow, I could barely keep my breath! I like the content of your poem, it's very sweet. I don't fully understand why you've made this poem ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Deep shallow water

    Hello, this is Sally writing. I like the way you indented every other line. However, I do not see any clear destination or conclusion of the poem. Keep writing!

    Jun 30, 2013


The ink in which our lives are inscribed is indelible.
— Helena 'HG' Wells, Warehouse 13