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Re: Griphen
Hi, this is Skyaejin! I really liked the way you wrote this poem. The story or content is unlike any other poems I had previously read. The way you end ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: A Witch In The Modern World
Hi, this is Sally. It's very interesting! Your title caught my eyes. I like the way you expressed your feelings about how society judges. Maybe you could add more diversity ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: HOPE
Hi, this is Sally. Wow, I could barely keep my breath! I like the content of your poem, it's very sweet. I don't fully understand why you've made this poem ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Deep shallow water
Hello, this is Sally writing. I like the way you indented every other line. However, I do not see any clear destination or conclusion of the poem. Keep writing!
Jun 30, 2013
