Skittles

Wow....i like where its headed because,well, i don't know exactly where it is headed. you leave me wanting to know more! so....give it to me or else. Some of it ...

Alright...First...i would split everything up so that it isn't so long. I read the first chapter, the beginning was sorta cool. I always give a book a few lines after ...

okay! I've read and I luuuuv your concept, but I would still like you to expand on this land. The names are original, I LIKE THAT! as for your spoiler, ...

OKAYS! I first want to apologize for not getting around to your second part of the story, even though i said i would. My only excuse is that i've been ...

Okay, so i came like you wanted... :D And i have picked up the usual helpful, but annoying nitpicks for you... 1.) "From the things mouth dropped..." this took me ...

OMG!- That was beautiful...I can't even bring myself to critque this piece of work, not like it needs it or anything...This was just too wonderfully done...Mr. Knightly you have managed ...

Welcome...*clicks like button*...This was very well done...I have to be honest though, although there were a few mistakes that everyone else has gladly pointed out, I'm a tad wee bit ...

Okay *cracks knuckles* I'm going to give it to you straight, but I promise i won't be too tough on you...Because I am just like a Ryan...Matter of FACT. Everything ...

I will first agree with Apple...nothing seemed gramaticaly wrong...and now I rate your story with five words in no apparent order...: 1. awesome 2. disctriptive 3. lovely 4. addictive and ...

Esme's right. There really isn't much to say here other than your description and detail to your main character's emotions where fantastic! I would like to see a chapter one ...

Well you managed to capture my attention...keep me realed in...there were a few times where I had to let go...then there were times where my mother couldn't peel me away ...

OH..My..God! This was amazing. i was enchanted, engulfed right into the story. i couldn't find anything other than what everyone else has said. i don't want to sound like a ...

“So we should get going...” he said in attempt to ease the awkwardness of the situation. “I will give you some time alone.” He gave a quick shake with my ...

Something similar happened to me! i was at sleep away church camp as well with my best friend in the world! anyway she's one year younger so she was in ...

i know a lot of people who go through that kind of stuff. my friend is worried that it will happen to her, but i assure her(since her parents are ...