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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Hephalump

    What a ferocious poem, with every word calculated! The photo and font make it sincerely POP. I will strain to think of a few suggestions, but certainly with a lot ...

    Dec 28, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 3

    Gauging by previous reviews you are probably aware of certain things I'm about to say: Not only was her house destroyed and parents maimed (as previously mentioned) but her belongings ...

    Dec 23, 2022

  • Hi, this has an intriguing perspective, and so I'll give it my time. Opening line could be sharper: bad is a vague adjective, and so is noun thing. In the ...

    Dec 21, 2022

  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: A poem I wrote about Life and Death

    The moon is more eerie than even seems at first glance, when it is chemically, structurally, and orbitally analyzed. There is no widely accepted theory on how it formed, and ...

    Dec 20, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: portrait of a shapeshifter

    Hello! I felt you made good line cuts/slices in the first half of the depiction, but lost the rythym of meaningful transition as it slid onward, line to line. A ...

    Dec 20, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Prologue

    *Cracks knuckles* Alright let's discuss :) Fairly attractive opening line, cutting right to the fortified minerals of a Lab. However, you stated the window was large and then huge in ...

    Dec 20, 2022

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