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I'm not the greatest at grammar so... What I liked: - How you intertwined the feeling of inspiration with your surroundings. (you were camping weren't you? ;)) - Inspiration is ...

I like the idea, but the wording could use a little work (but I don't get imagery so it might just do as well to stay like it is). Anyways ...

Okay, I was a little lost but it probably was because I've never read this book.... - Don't use I, our, you/your, ect. I don't know if your teacher is ...

The Good: - It's an interesting idea to say the least. Very captivating. It kept my interest enough where I want to read more and find out what the envolupes ...

Very good. Especially since your a first time writer. I really just have two things to say: 1.) Your actual writing 'voice' is good -- you'd make a great writer ...

I'm also a fan of the Grimm Brothers, but I have never seen the movie either, but it seems like it would be interesting. To keep it short and simple: ...

Wow... that was amazing! I love fairy tales and myths. This is a fabulous mixture of both: I LOVED IT! I just wish I could have read this sooner to ...