SirenCymbaline

No problem, I liked reading it.

I left the beginning of some lines uncapitalised to connect them to the one that came before it.

Ghosts are cool anyway. I will defy this post and be cool. (Joke aside, this poem was pretty funny, thanks.)

Thank you for your feedback, we will definitely take these points into consideration when writing future installments. :) I hope to see you around then.

All I can say about the setting not being very historically accurate is that this is more like an alternate version of the time period we were going for. One ...

Sorry I posted the same thing twice. Feel free to delete the second message.

I have not reviewed in a very long time, but bear with me. I liked this so much that I really wanted to leave some sort of feedback. This story, ...

Guilty as charged.

At the start, there's a link to the Foreword which should explain most of your questions regarding what this is all about.

...2014. I went back and edited that error, and I also added the spoiler with a brief as possible summary of Forbye's original backstory to the actual foreword blog instead ...

Thank you. :) Yes, the line "Apologies do not mistakes undo" is a rather hard one. By inverting the last words, did you mean changing it to "Apologies do not ...

Thank you so much! reading this review made me really happy. Harshly criticizing my own writing was not very hard, because I don't like what I wrote when I was ...

Thank you! so nice to read what you said. And yes, that was the message I was going for. :)

Well done, I'm always impressed by essays that inform me and keep me from zoning out at the same time. Good job. :)