-
Re: The edge of voyages
Coolio! Did she (she?) live or die? Where are they? What is the setting? Overall, I really liked it. Keep writing!
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: The Curse of the Queen
YO leeanna13097!!!! LOVE it!!!! Though why would the gaurds not have their weapons? They are very stupid! But keep on writing!
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: The Day I Killed My Love
Wow!!! That's all I can say. It's really deep and emotional. I also get my best ideas late at night especially after a confusing day. I'll keep looking for your ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Red (with pictures)
Interesting and thought provoking how you look at red.
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Mr. Green Loves Whales: A Children's Story
Dear FreeVoice, This would make an AMAZING children's story, especially in states that are near the ocean and have local whales like Maine. Besides the couple grammar errors, I loved ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Writing in the Rain (My first freeform, please critique)
Interesting poem. I myself am a poet and love looking at different views of poetry. Your really caught my attention.
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Rowan (for lack of a better title)
Coolio!!! Being a fan and proud owner of three cats I found this most interesting. I especially liked how you put the cat's thoughts. I can't wait to see how ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Mirror World- Prologue
COOLIO :)
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: ...
OMG!!!!!!! That was sooo cool! Is there more to the story??? Who is the main character????
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole; Ch. 1
You rock!!!!! Great beginning and descriptions, but where are we?? What is the background and setting??? Don't give up!!!! It is a masterpiece in progress.
Jan 20, 2010