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Ah, that's just me being forgetful then, just don't rememeber Necros being mentioned! I guess you could mention them a little more for other dumbasses like me, but it's not ...

I really like that idea for Suraj actually, makes him seem like a real living person, y'know? Because we all want to impress someone. I'd definitely run with that if ...

Ohhh, I see! The family thing makes more sense now, seems more normal for new siblings to appear now I know there's a polygamy thing going on. My family (well, ...

Oh fantastic, I'm glad I made you reconsider! Never give up, I always say :)

Oh, yipee!! Good :D

If Alexanda's mark plays a sizeable role int he future, then yeah, ignore what I said! It was a 'just in case' kind of thing really. The other tings mentioned ...

Gurl, you rock. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, like, the entirety of this. I'm super appreciative, and it's good to know that you like this on the whole. ...

Oh yay, I like it when I'm not the only person because it reassures me that I'm not just a ball of pointless drivel :P And oh, for sure, I ...

Hihi, thanks muchly for this review! :D I have an issue (with this novel especially) with throwing in breaks that aren't necessary/going a bit overboard on them, so I totally ...

Well, didn't I just take 982321321 decades to respond to this. I like to think of it as me being a useless ball of dung. Like the kind a dung ...

ohhidere. I feel really bad that I've not responded to your critiques on this properly because I always try to, so I'm a massive ball of shame right now. Once ...

Thank you muchly for these reviews, Hannah! :) Your comment on Felix giving summaries and things not being described moment-to-moment is an issue I know I have because I'm a ...

Thanking you :3 It's super awesome that you enjoyed this chapter overall, despite not having read previous ones. That's always a good sign! I always miss nit-picks myself, so I ...

Hihi! Thanks muchly for your reviews, and sorry for not acknowledging them sooner. I'm currently without a laptop (and am abroad) so am running around like a bit of a ...

Thanking you! I totally agree with you on the stuff you mentioned, especially with the descriptive issues. Description doesn't come naturally to me, so it's practically my mortal enemy. Effie's ...