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Haha, there we go then. You win in the end ;)

Yeah, I used to watch Grimm, which had a similar sort of idea! Oh that's awkward, haha, bless you both!!

Oh, I've heard of that! Never seen it though

It used be Emma, but rewatching it now it's definitely Rikki. I'm such a fangirl though, it's unreal :P

I've literally been binge watching it on Netflix since this review, not even joking xD That's totally fair enough then, if Andy finding out now is vital for the rest ...

'Sup! I'm super happy you're liking things so far, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) I didn't realise how repetitive I was being at times, so thanks ...

Great, I look forward to finding out more! I highly doubted he was literally that hateful, but it just comes off a little strong for me sometimes. It's all personal ...

I'm also offensively impatient, so 80% of it is probably just me :P But yus, just some really subtle hints that get your readers questioning things, coming up with their ...

Yeah, little things like remembering kids get tired can really solidify things! Making Maggie more eager would work, methinks. You could maybe make it so that Maggie goes to immediately ...

Ah, that's super cool, I lived and worked there for 6 months last year! (Sydney, which is so typical, I know, but still) That's so interesting about your friend, it's ...

Yau usefulness! Ah okay, yeah, I'd try and make that POV switch a little more obvious if possible. Combining chapters sounds like a super good idea too, so I say ...

Ah, I see! Maybe note that she's doing it somewhere? Sincere apologies if you have and I've simply forgotten, I tend to do dumb stuff like that. I'd never sugest ...

N'aw, thanks. Your feedback is also super appreciated! For Aiden, it's all a bit of a front, which is explored a little more in future chapters. I'm glad that aspect ...

I totally understand your toils with the info thing. It's just about striking that balance between explaining everything that's necessary, but doing so as little as possible. That in itself ...

Thanks for another super useful review! :3 It's a real challenge, especially in these earlier chapters where he's being introduced, because I do want Preston to be plain odd, bizarre, ...