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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Glass Walls

    I wish I could write lyrics like you! The way you've written your lyrics is so natural and doesn't feel forced at all. I love it because the first verse ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled chapter one *edited*

    I loved this! I can't really criticize you for anything! I'm not very good when it comes to grammar but I'm pretty sure that you don't have many grammar mistakes. ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My notebook

    I loved this poem! It's simple yet very interesting and well written. I liked the way you used blank to rhyme with ink. I thought it work rather well! It ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Society:

    I love the way you have written this. It really makes you think, well it definitely made me think! I understand this poem because my cousin is gay and ever ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: “Full stop”

    I love your writing style. It is a very uniqe style and that is something I love. Individuality. Although I must say that it took me quite a while to ...

    Apr 5, 2009


I am proud of my self, the reason why some of you might disagree with me a little with, but nevertheless I still proud.
— Oxara